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What is a Victory Story?

It's an opportunity to champion the little guy. A chance to show others that it is worth the effort to stand up and fight back.


Others would benefit from hearing how you have applied the tactics covered in Never Pay The First Bill and come out on top!


Encouraging one another is the best way to stay in the fight. Let's share in the joys and victories of those who have prevailed.


Perhaps you found a way to get a test or treatment for a better price or saved big money by spotting an error on your medical bill. Maybe you are an employer who reduced what you spend while providing better coverage for your workers.


Or, maybe you're a patient advocate, vendor or other insider who can tell us what we need to know. 


Your personal triumph and how-to tips could help someone in a similar situation. Please share! 

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How A Benefits Advisor Helped a Young Mom Fighting Cancer Win A Lifesaving Health Insurance Appeal –
In Two Days


Adam Berkowitz and his team had only two days to convince a young mom’s insurance company to pay for the care she needed to keep fighting cancer. 

The young woman – a friend of Adam’s wife – had suffered a recurrence of her pancreatic cancer. A tumor had spread to her liver and her doctors at MD Anderson said it had to be treated right away. But the woman’s insurance company was denying the radiofrequency ablation procedure her doctors recommended to destroy the cancer cells. The insurer claimed it wasn’t “medically necessary,” a common excuse health insurance companies use to deny care. 


The young mom had lost her appeals and didn’t know what to do. It was a Thursday in September and she had to fly to MD Anderson on Sunday. If the insurance company wouldn’t approve the procedure, she would need to pay the $47,900 price tag, up front, to get the procedure she needed to save her life. 

Insurance company denials are common. Americans pay more than ever for health insurance deductibles and premiums. But the companies routinely block the coverage they need. It’s hard to overstate the emotional toll these insurance company battles take on patients. I talked to the young mom who Adam and his team helped. She didn’t want her name or other identifying information used in this write up for privacy reasons. She said it felt so stressful to have to fight the appeal as a mom who also had to fight cancer that was spreading in her body.

I showed how to win an insurance company appeal in my book, “Never Pay the First Bill: And Other Ways to Fight the Health Care System and Win. I featured the tactics of Laurie Todd, an advocate known as The Insurance Warrior. Here’s how you win. You fight the insurer with evidence, pointing to its contractual requirement to provide the care. And you layer on heavy doses of urgency and social pressure. 

Adam runs a St. Louis health benefits company called Simpara. He’s read my book. In fact, he bought 200 of them for his clients and prospects! So my book served as a guide when he and his team jumped into the battle. He also referred to a copy of one of The Insurance Warrior’s appeals, which I have posted on my website as a resource. Adam is a benefits pro, but he said the book and the sample appeal were his roadmaps. 

Adam said he was initially tempted to write an emotional appeal letter on behalf of the young mom. He’s a husband and a father of three. He could relate to this young mom, a wife, an employee, who had been dealt an awful hand. “Why was the insurance company putting her through this type of stress when this is what all her doctors were recommending?” he asked himself.

It’s an understandable instinct, and emotion should be a key component in any appeal. But a common mistake is to make an appeal ONLY about emotion. You win these appeals by arguing with evidence. You have to prove that the insurer is failing to abide by the terms of its contractual agreement by denying the patient the care she needs.


Adam and his team put together a brilliant 8-page appeal memo, which I’ve posted here. They cited the credentials of the surgeon. And they showed the evidence that backs the validity of the less invasive ablation procedure the doctor recommended. The insurance company’s denial claimed the procedure was not “medically necessary.” So they referred to the health plan’s Summary Plan Document – its contractual agreement to provide coverage – to define “medical necessity.” Medically necessary procedures, the document said, are those that are required and the most economical available. The ablation fit those criteria. 

Further, they cited page 42 of the Plan Document, which said the decisions about treatment were “entirely between you and your Physician.” Piling on even more, they cited the insurer’s own medical policy, which said the radiofrequency ablation procedure is associated with lower complications, less blood loss and a shorter length of stay. Their appeal document also cited a second medical opinion that validated the safety and necessity of the procedure. In conclusion, they summarized that “it is our full expectation that the additional documentation provided satisfies Medical Necessity.”

Adam and his team also created a sense of URGENCY around the appeal. They titled it as the Insurance Warrior recommends: URGENT EXPEDITED REQUEST FOR RECONSIDERATION. Yes, it’s ALL CAPS. BOLD. And UNDERLINED. Gotta get their attention. 

And then Adam applied social pressure, which is the secret sauce for success. By Thursday morning they faxed the appeal to the insurance company, and then Adam and his team started calling everyone they could find who worked for the insurer. They also called the young mom’s employer, a global food and beverage packaging company. 

About 155 million Americans get their benefits through their employer. In those cases, you MUST involve your employer in any urgent appeal. In many cases, particularly with larger employers, they are running a self-funded health plan. That means the employer is ultimately on the hook for the medical costs and hires an insurance company to operate as a third-party administrator, paying the claims. In those cases, the employer sets the policies, not the plan administrator. So the employer needs to be urged to approve the care the patient needs. 

Adam’s team faxed the appeal document to every number they could find in the plan documents. They were told that the fastest an urgent appeal could be turned around was 72 hours, but they didn’t have that much time. He worked the phones, calling every number he could find at the insurance company, and everyone he could think of at her employer, including the executives. He left the emotion out of it and kept the message simple: “We have a client seeking an expedited appeal. She needs to fly out in two days.” 

Adam’s breakthrough came via the insurer’s peer-to-peer phone line. That’s where the physicians for the insurer talk to the doctors treating their members. It was the only place he could get a real person to respond to him who had insight into the process. Within hours of blitzing everyone he could think of with phone calls, while he was talking to the peer-to-peer representative, Adam got the great news: The procedure had been APPROVED IN FULL. 

He doesn’t know how the approval happened, but he was overcome by a flood of relief. “I wanted to jump through the phone and kiss this woman,” he said. “In all my career I’ve never seen anything like this. We were all in tears.”


The young mom got the procedure she needed and is now recovering. Her latest bloodwork, pending a scan to confirm the prognosis, shows no evidence of the cancer. If the scans show she remains clear, she told me, her treatment will be complete.  

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Fighting Cancer Appeal - In Two Days

How one patient saved more than $8,000 for two MRIs


Kevin Vincent knew he’d have to pay cash for two MRIs of his back. The 51-year-old from Amarillo, Texas had a high deductible health insurance plan that required him to pay $10,000 before his coverage kicked in. 


Kevin’s nurse practitioner referred him to a nearby hospital-affiliated imaging center for the two MRIs. How much is this going to cost? Kevin asked when he called the imaging center. 


The customer service representative told him they would charge his insurance plan $11,000 for the two tests. Or, if he paid cash it would be $9,000. 


The sticker shock caused Vincent to gasp. The helpful rep told him not to worry, and offered to put him on a payment plan. 


Going into debt for his MRIs didn’t sound like a good idea. Fortunately Vincent, who sells property and casualty insurance, knew Josh Butler, a health benefits consultant in Amarillo. 


Butler confirmed that the price was outrageous and referred him to Green Imaging. Green Imaging contracts with imaging centers around the country to offer cash prices for CT scans, mammograms, MRIs, X-rays and other imaging tests. 


The new price: $950. For both MRIs. At an imaging center about half a mile from the one that quoted him the $9,000 price. 


Vincent would not be able to apply the cash-payment to his deductible, but it saved him a lot of money. He got the MRIs at the less expensive facility and even got them read by a radiologist, and will receive copies of his images. He shakes his head in astonishment that he got the same tests for more than $8,000 less by shopping around. That’s about what I paid for my last car - a huge savings!


It’s a great example of a victory for Vincent. But it upset him to think of people who didn’t know they could get a better deal. “The fact that so many people are financing this debt, and they could save so much money - I didn’t like it, frankly.” 


So what are the key takeaways from Kevin’s Victory Story?

  1. Health care pricing varies greatly. One study found that the price of an MRI can vary from $300 to $3,000 in the same geographic area, with no demonstrated difference in quality. And it’s true for other things, too

  2. Clinics and imaging centers associated with hospitals are known to cost more. Check the prices at a center that’s not affiliated with a hospital. 

  3. Kevin saved more than $8,000 by going through Check them out if you need an imaging study.  


Victory Stories

Gabby — Hoboken, NJ

"I had almost given up hope after receiving a horrendous emergency room bill when Marshall Allen came to the rescue! Marshall has been wonderful and supportive in guiding me through the process while uncovering layers of shocking and exploitative practices of the private health care system. I believe Never Pay The First Bill will bring hope to many others in fighting this corrupt system."

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